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Status: Member
Join Date: Apr 2005
Age: 26
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Once upon a time, there was this boy named A. A had a bunch of fren. tat was after o level dat they started to work in a factory. den everytime after work, they would gather and go to nearby shopping mall.
There was this 1 time they went to a particular mall.. as they was walking, A saw a gal which totally caught her attention! The gal was in the KFC refilling her cup of water. A was so excited that he tell his frens about the gal. but his frens dunno which gal is he toking about. so A point to the direction of the gal.suddenly the gal turn back and saw A. A was so paiseh tat he immediatly put down his hand and turn away. after tat, the gal came out and walk past A back to her working place which was eventually the gal's father's shop. A wanted to go over know her.. but was too shy.. den his frens decided to help him. A juz quietly standing beside the shop which the gal cant see her.. as mins past, A's heart begin to tumple faster and faster... wondering wat took them so long to buy accesories...(becoz A's fren told him tat they wanted to go in take a look at the gal and also buy accessories for their gf) after a while, A's fren came out.. but to A's surprise, followed behind his frens is the small little pettie big eye gal which was also the gal tat caught her attention... A was totally shy. dun dare to utter a word. finally pluck up the courage to speak...'er...er....u look very sweet..er...can i know you?' A's head look at the floor coz he was too paiseh to look at the gal.but the gal did not say anything.. A was wondering why no reply. so he look up. the gal was too shy also.. whole face red.. A ask again'er...how old are you??'the gal did not reply again. all A know is that the gal keep smiling and too shy to look at A. A ask again'may i have your hp number?' A took out his hp to pass it to the gal. the gal press her number and pass back the phone and den ran in. A stood there motionless... his heart like anytime gonna burst... since that day, A begin to msg the gal.. call the gal.. he cant stop thinking about the gal.. almost everyday would be miting each other.. and A would sent her to work everyday without fail... after which he went back to factory to continue his work.. as months pass.. they grow deeply in love with each other.. den juz 1 fine day at mrt station.. A ask the gal 'will u be my gf?' once again.. the gal did not reply and dun dare look at A. her whole face was red like apple.. but something shock A. the gal eventually hug on A. A was stun.. everyday without fail they would have a chat a nite thru phone.. the gal always complain to A that her father keep hitting her. pull her ear ring(btw her father was damn strict with her) A hear liao heart was so pain but cant do antthing. he tot of protecting the gal. but how is he goin to protect. A hate himself. the gal treat A very nice. she dosent mind A being poor. when A did not have money to eat, she would treat him. that makes A wan to make a mark for himself. as years past by.. their relationship still growing strong.. A was deeply in love with her. even plan to marry her when she is 21. but juz before she turn 21................................................ ......something happen.. as usual.. a 1 fine day.. A was playing basketball at his usual cc with his fren. and once in a while , the gal would specially come down from north east side to west juz to see him.. the gal dress beautifully.. when the gal came, A stop playing. instead he went to company his gf. while they were talking happily, A's gf hp keep ringing.. and A suspect something.. A ask his gf 'who is tat guy ar??' the gal reply 'fren la... ' so A juz dismiss it as a fren...after a while.. the hp ring again.. this time the gal was talking happily with the guy. A felt jealous.. super jealous.. he ask her again 'who is he?' her gf reply the same answer again. A ask ' he wan to woo you is it?' her gf reply 'no la.. siao.. fren onli la...' A had nothing to say anymore since her gf put it that way. den her gf ask A'eh.. u know how to do this problem ma?' A was feeling uneasy already. so he straight away reply no in a fierce tone. her gf said 'ok lo.. u dunno nvm. i go find the guy. he sure know.' A's heart was screaming like hell.. wat the **** is happening.. everything goes wrong... A juz keep it to himself... and keep quiet thru out.. den her gf said 'hey.. i gtg liao.. the guy come pick me up with his bike' A was so stun. he plead not to go with the guy (becoz he had the feeling if he was to let her gf go, she will lose her forever) the guy plead and plead and plead... the gal juz said ' why dun u say juz now? now he on the way liao. how u expect me to tell him?' A juz continue to plead. and thinking of losing her precious gf, he cried... but her gf continue to go over to the guy which was waiting for her at the opposite blk with his bike.. leaving A alone..crying to himself... A was totally devastated. he feel numb to everything.everything in the world seems grey. all he knew was his eyes was filled with tears.. tears of sorrow and sadness... he just sat at the same spot the whole day. thinking about the incident over and over again... after few hour past.. A decided to msg his gf.. his gf totally ignored him.. ignored him all the way.. it was thru her fren called J tat he knew her gf was togetehr with the guy liao. A was depressed.stayed at home for the next 4 month. lying on bed looking at celling.. his mother was worried. wat had happen to him.. A didnt say anything. juz continue watching the celling whole day thru out the 4 month.. in A's mind, everything became black.. he cant see anything.. he felt he was blind.. he lost the pair of eyes (her gf)... later on in the yr, he came to know that it was J which destroy his reltionship. J was jealous becoz she keep seeing A and her gf togetehr so sweetly. becoz J herself everytime had failed relationship. years had passed.. A had a few raltionship.. but none of it was successful.. he still cant forget his gf.. he felt helpless.. he felt lonely.. A didnt blame anyone.. not even his gf.. A was blaming himself.. even till now.. he hate himself very very much.. since den.. he had a toatlly shattered heart which can never be peice up together again...... He still love his gf alot alot alot.. forever and ever.... [I want to be your prince, But i know i cant.. All those in fairy tales are lies.. when u tell me u love me, the stars in my sky began lighting up..i am willing to become the angel in the fairy tales that you like, to open my arms to protect you....] |
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Status: *@*
Join Date: Jun 2005
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too long liao.. i will read again after my dinner..
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Status: Master Member
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 2,600
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too long liao. i will save it for bed time story.
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Status: Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: warwickshire
Age: 23
Posts: 964
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why does A hate himself?
He shouldn't. When one person has a change of heart, it's nobody's fault. Feelings are sometimes beyond our control. But I can sense that A really put his all into that r'ship.. Just hope that time will slowly dilute the feeling. Memories cannot be erased Someday, A will find "the one" for him.. he will eventually has the happiness he deserves
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Status: Natsume Hyuuga
Join Date: Jul 2003
Location: 有缘无情 有情无缘 的世界里
Age: 25
Posts: 6,056
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hmmxxx...... quite long... the girl left him right? LOLX..
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Status: Little Big Dreamer!
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: Singapore
Age: 11
Posts: 12,586
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ermm can summarise?
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About Love | My life, My Story | What is your MBTI?"To love someone, you doesn't have to be together with her. As long as you can see the smile on her face, its all that matters. Love will take its form in a different way." ![]() If only everyday is like dat! |
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Status: Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: warwickshire
Age: 23
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ehh.. i think i help him summarise coz i seem like d only one who finish reading his post..
basically, it's about a girl whom a guy, "A" cannot forget. Firstly, it's about how they met. Then how they got together. They were very much in love. "A" even planned to marry her when she turns 21. But then, there was a third party. The girl end up leaving "A". After this r'ship, "A" went into other r'ships but none were successful. "A" blames himself and is totally heartbroken- even till today and he's still very much in love with the girl.
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Status: Trooper
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: Yishun
Age: 28
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the story don't have a conclusion??
or an ending?? just end like that ah??
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Last edited by wklee; 19-07-2005 at 10:44 PM.. |
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Status: Master Member
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 2,600
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how long ago was it?
you still can't get over her? |
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Status: *@*
Join Date: Jun 2005
Posts: 2,011
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finally read finished liao..
when relationship ends, nobody fault, it just that they are not fated to be together. she just onli one of the passerby which cross your street, you will have many more passerby and one of them will be the final one. ![]() |
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Status: Member
Join Date: Apr 2005
Age: 26
Posts: 14
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Quote:
its just a story which i found on the web.. ![]() |
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Status: Master Member
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: DisneyLand
Posts: 3,569
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Hm..er..dunhz!!
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Status: Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2004
Location: warwickshire
Age: 23
Posts: 964
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Quote:
aiiyoo.. to think i go n summarise for u again... ![]()
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